Class Agenda 12B – Revising for Sensory Details

Date: 9/28/17

Throwback Thursday

Opening Song “Passing Me By” The Pharcyde (4:43 – 1995)

  • Create this image in your notebook-

  • Share-  

Partner share 


SLT- I can use a mix of context and anecdote in my journal writing.

SLT- I can connect my anecdotes to our BCS Habits of Character and Habits of Scholarship. 

SLT- I can stretch and revise my anecdotes using sensory details. 

SLT- I can use models to help strengthen my own writing.

SLT- I can identify the elements of a This I Believe Essay.

circle the verbs, underline the nouns

  • Mini Lesson

  • Reviewing the senses and some of sensory details- model on ELMO
    • Partner work- 5 minutes- work together to fill out as many sensory words as you can.


Class Work

  • Use your revision to add Sensory Details into your anecdotes.

Habits of Character/Habits Of Scholarship Computer Work

  • Finish Habits of Scholarship/Habits of Character Letter

This I Believe Computer Work

Please be responsible for your own computer.

Closing Circle-

One Sensory Word you used or would like to.



Sharing Steps-

  1. Go to Drive
  2. Title: your name This I Believe 
  3. Share with Josh B and Lauren


Homework- Decide if you’re going for a 3 or a 4 on your homework rubric.

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